At the corner of the bar he sits, head down, nursing his
beer.
The scholarship had come, but while he’d been on the
starting lineup that first year the scouts had paid him no mind.
In hindsight, he should’ve paid more attention during the
actual classes.
Still, the mill wasn’t bad. His old man had worked there 40
years and seemed happy enough.
He finishes his drink, waves for another and, when the
bartender arrives, clears his throat.
“Did I ever tell you about the time…”
“Yeah, I remember.”
“Oh.”
He swallows, beer and sadness, and returns to his thoughts.
Very effective in such a short space. We see all avenues closing down for this guy. The brevity makes it even more affecting.
ReplyDeletelove this! You managed to get me interested into this character within such a small story, well done! Those are the little Friday Flash gems I like.
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